I really like your design Chikki!
I think the upper part (both the front and back) looks absolutely amazing and the hairstyle is so cute.
I'm not a fan of the stockings and I think it would have looked better with long white boots with black and golden details. (like the top)
I think the shoes for the male version need more white, they blend too much with the pants.
But overall I REALLY like your design. I love the combination of black, white and gold and it doesn't look like a crazy 'impossible' design either. I think it's weird you didn't get a place in the top. :(