i personally feel the pants on male, and front torso of male could've had something to make it a bit flashier. not necessarily talking about golden pinstripes, or purple flowers. but at the moment it just looks like a flat piece of black fabric, that of course isn't always a bad thing, for example on the business outfits, but on this it feels like a wasted opportunity. the hat too, could've used some sort of detail, like a red or black feather, or a red or black band. other than that, it's a whole new outfit, and i like that. bns lacks "dark" outfits, like ravenesque(nevermore), so seeing something like this in game would be amazing.
pants on male dull
left side (when looking from front) of male torso lacks detail
hat lacks detail (simple fix by adding single accesory)
an actual cape, and not some weird thing like Inferno has
the game lacks good hats, this definitely would've been a great hat
overall very unique. does slightly remind me of Scarlet Shadow, and Steel Will, but that's definitely nothing negative.
tldr: very unique outfit and style, but lacks detail in some parts.